Thread:Dentface/@comment-1984959-20120729095331/@comment-1984959-20120730024512

LOL I knew Blackbeard did make the Jumbees(read it here and down at POTC Wiki)...I guess I just spoke from the movies' perspective. Oops. lol

Anyway, thanks so much for your help, mate! :)

Though I do see one or two corrections that need be made(or at least something I'd do)... According to pirate lore, the Queen Anne's Revenge was crewed only by zombies before the recruitment of Angelica and the rest of the human crew in Pirates of the Caribbean: On Stranger Tides.
 * I would write "as well as the rest of the human..." because of the fact that Angelica may have sailed aboard the QAR longer. The current sentence seems to suggest that Angelica was recruited with Scrum and co.

Sometime after the battle at Ocracoke Lake, Blackbeard saved the Queen Anne's Revenge, but later lost it to Jolly Roger, to take control of his pre-zombie crew, the Jumbees.
 * I'd write "who had taken"...or "has", depending if you guys use past or present tense.(wow, this is my first time speaking "grammar teacher language") lol

To ensure loyalty, the zombie crew were promoted to officers of Queen Anne's Revenge to keep the newly crewed, indentured men in line.
 * I'd write "the zombie crew served as Blackbeard's officer aboard the Queen..." as nothing really says that the zombies were promoted, only that Blackbeard created them.(my speculated guess, he probably learned from what happened with the Jumbees in POTCO, so he made the zombies 100% loyal to avoid further disloyalty)

''Also, Blackbeard has learned powerful magic that allows him to resurrect and bind zombies to his will. Along with this ability, he can use the Sword of Triton to control his entire ship, this making him a very powerful adversary''
 * "His entire ship" should be changed to either "his ship" or, if you want to be more specific, "the QAR"...whichever floats your boat(no pun intended). This is mostly because the word "entire" doesn't seem necessary...well, to me anyway.

Oh, and noticing a few things outside of the movie material... Under "Clarification of Current Ownership of the Ship" Since Jolly Roger has control of LaSchafe, he also has control of the entire Zombie, or "Jumbee" Crew.
 * Take out Zombie, as the crew Jolly Roger controls are only Jumbess(as far as I know).

Under "Game Notes" The Queen Anne's Revenge has living pirates onboard in the movies but in Pirates Online you only fight Blackbeard's zombies.
 * Well, as noted from my previous correction suggestion, change "zombies" to "Jumbees". If it's necessary, you can also note the zombies appear in the movies...again, if needed be specific.

Yea, sorry if some of these seem a bit picky, but that's just what I'd do. Hope all of this proved useful! xD