User blog comment:Dentface/Spooky Happenings & Membership Giveaway!/@comment-70.59.227.121-20121017013231

Im not good at Halloween stories but i have one ( ahem ) from - X Jumper ( Dent's Friend ) Please enjoy my story. I know it's such a long story but please read it because i made this story for the Contest. Enjoy!

Once upon a time, there was a nice blue ghost named Pete Abred making dinner for his Family( his Family wasn't ghosts but Pete Abred was ). He was cooking his famous bread for Dinner. Suddenly a big creek spotted. Pete and his Family didn't know what it was but they were frightned. A scary voice was heard ' I had come for yer Family, Pete Abred! . It was Jolly Roger to cursed Pete's Family into serving El Patron's ghost crew!. Jolly cursed Pete's Family. His Family and Jolly disappeared and Pete was very upset. He needs help to free his Family so he went to ask another friendly ghost named Constance Sorrow for helped. Help! said Pete, I need yer help Constance! My Family was cursed by Jolly Roger so my Family can serve El Patron!. Oh Dear said' Constance ', i dont know if i can help you. We'll have to ask a gypsy named Angel O' Bonney from Port Royal. Pete Abred and Constance Sorrow went off to Port Royal yo see Angel. :O Why you here ' said Angel '. Pete replyed ' My Family are cursed by Jolly Roger and they will serve into El Patron's ghost crew. O_O that's terrible' said Angel ' but i have just the cure to free yer Family but you'll have to go to El Patron's Mine to find yer Family. Okay ' said Pete and Constance '. Angel gave them a special potion and they hurried to Raven's Cove. Once Pete and Constance arrived at Raven's Cove, they went to the Elevator Shaft and up to El Patron's Mine. El Patron's Mine was a spooky place. It was filled with Orange Ghosts. Cursed Blades were made. Lots of Idols and outside of Raven's Cove, there was El Patron's Ship. Pete Abred and Constance Sorrow are searching for Pete's Family. They finally found Pete's Family. Pete had a Mom ,Dad, a Sister, and Brother. They were hired by El Patron to guard the South Idol. Pete's Family were angry as they looked at us. They are ghost's and ghost's are Scoundrels vs Pirates but Pete needs to free his Family. Pete took out a piece of string to tie up his Family.' I know what to do ' said Pete Abred. His Family started to attack Pete and Constance but Pete quickly tie them all up before they can strike their swords a bit. They were angry. ' Hurry, I need you to have them drink the potion ' said Pete. ' Alright! ' said Constance, I hope this works. Constance put the potion up their mouths each Family at a time. They all gulped as they drink the potion. Pete's Family were turned back into Normal People! ' Son! ' said Pete's Mom, you saved us! Constance couldn't agree more and she was happy Pete got his Family back. Pete, Constance, and Pete's Family sailed back home. Pete invited Constance for dinner with his Family. Pete Abred, Constance Sorrow, Pete Abred's Family all have dinner of Pete's delicious bread. Pete and his Family are once a happy Family forever!!

The End! and hoped you enjoyed! Thanks!

X Jumper