User blog comment:Cap'n Bloodheart/Pirates of the seven seas/@comment-5942879-20131019055917

hmm, good start. sometimes theres grammar mistakes though. also you have to make a space when the speaker changes like this:

"Get outta me way, idiot!" Said  Captain Bones

"Aye sir!" Said First Mate Skully. Thats an example. It makes the story look longer and its easier to read :) Otherwise good start! WE NEED AN UPDATE!